No nono you do't have to translate it buddy i'm pretty good in english what i meant is to space up your paragraph exemple
It was a long windy day and the poor little girl was freezing, all she had was her teddy with her to keep a small feeling of the meaning of warmth she sigh oh teddy... what we gonna do she whispered as she follow the long snowy path searching a new home away from this bloody orphanage
It was a long windy day and the poor little girl was freezing, all she had was her teddy with her to keep a small feeling of the meaning of warmth *she sigh* : "oh teddy... what we gonna do?" *she whispered as she follow the long snowy path searching a new home away from this bloody orphanage*
Review Upside: What a nice delightful story where the main character is being corrupt by the main antagonist! It gave the story so much intense feeling it's so awesome!!!, Jestro still my favorite thoeven if he wasn't there for long XD... I loved the music it was awesome to read!I love the good ending, sounds classic from a girl but eh i don't like when it end badly but i liked the fact that they had a capability of continuing the adventure in the neutral ending
Downside: Really had difficulty to know when a character talk and when an action was down I had to reread many time before understanding, that's all!
Awesome work dear friend can't wait to hear more! believe in yourself you have so much talent
got there back story done gigabyte is first then hexdemical and megabyte . In the beginning there was only gigabyte destroyer and corrupter of mainframe ,bob we got an issue how bad is it.Soldiers suris with there green fur line up only to be thrown back against the buildings its an class 5 virus and from the looks of one a very strong one if gets pass us here there's no telling what it will do .
Phong looks up the viruses name gigabyte and its power is unparalleled is it an way to separate it if we get it to take up to much damage in theory it should split into two ,but be warned the only reason it has not killed anyone yet is because its still developing you mean its not finished in growth cycle .
Oh no its coming for the core the greatest source of energy here,bob runs out seeing gigabyte my format virus to corrupt and conquer almost reaches the building bob is standing on the roof of it phong now ! Overloads the shield that's in lost angles it unfortunately wipes out the city an shock wave of air pushes through mainframe damaging it but leaving it intact when the smoke clears everyone wonders what happened in that very moment. The two of them split off from one another one staying the other leaving for mainframe megabyte woke up first away from hexdemical stayed in lost angles . pic and theme of gigabyte stands as an giant felis in size compared to normal
megabyte backstory first half. I still need an host to sustain myself come here hey your not supposed to be here ,jumps at them from the ceiling knocking them out seeing his chance shifts form to that of an snake slithers into there mouth then down there throat making an sicking cracking sound ,what happened i can't seem to rember feels an weight inside of them move some ignores it .
collecting more info on the Torr an mostly empty building perfect climbs into the building late at night stop right there the power was just cut to our room back i got this heads of alone,hears nothing hears suris move in an way hissing at them runs into the rest in the walls looking at them reels in fear who are you...is shut in walks up to were they are cautious your an virus alright looks as there sleeping is grabbed the moment they come to close.
There eyes produce an red glow moving there head holds onto them not letting them go ,trys to pry them off to no avail ,gets on top of them your an guardian just what i was looking forward to forces them to hold there mouth open with paws moves out of the present canis into them ,no no ,yesss slithers down there throat it will be over when say its so makes them hold still making them twitch in pleasure of it continues to resist get out of me afraid at what hes forcing them to do.
oh i won't leave you starts by moving them to an secure location with his army guarding him cocoons self in an open space of two walls holding the canis body as an source of nutriment growing to their full size many weeks later claws out of it slowly regains there sense of balance calls the rest of his army to make plans to attack the outside of mainframes core while he takes it over.
hexdemical backstory .Feels an sharp echoing need for an host,What i thought i was wasn't in need of one yet flips mask to red oh but it will be an surprise crackles hears scuzzy chirping some go and lead one of those mainframers over here scuzzy runs off seems like one was to curious spotting them through the camera oh excellent ako looks around hey is that an suri that's not an null but i wonder why scuzzy blocks them from going backwards seems it wants me to follow it well anything better than being lost here walks in seeing the path branch out while scuzzy growls at the nulls suris in the way forcing them to move.seems your not so bad continues to follow them it hits night time,leads the way here?
suddenly falls into an tunnel ow getting up my my look at yourself what is confused i see no one here taps the mirror slowly not there then where? pleasure to meet you ako the data collector long way from home stay an bit i promise you can stay as long as you like,ako tries to run hitting against an now closed tunnel ah you hurt my feeling switches mask to that being sad before switching it back to normal ako says this revel yourself is caught by hexdemical ahh jumps up in fright.
my my your face was priceless let go of me and ruin the fun hex growls shifting form to that of an snake forces them to open there mouth slowly slithers into them making them shiver reaching there throat clutching at it feels the weight of them slide down hmm starts to take control of you'll be my host don't struggle makes them start on instinct warping around making an nest starts to cocoon self at the same time megabyte is grows to full size in the safety of there lair claws out of it from being upside down making an call out to megabyte hears it answers back.
bob past backstory .Starts off with him almost making to the core of main being caught by bob when his was an cadet in training under an another guardian prepare to be deleted virus the female guardian says but why did you have to be so cold and hostile to him , hes an virus unknown to them he let himself be captured using his claw tips to hit the lock around his legs/neck warning virus out of containment the computer is hit upon saying that shutting of the alarm.
Back bob I'll deal with him is knock back by megabyte run bob but I don't want to leave you no time for that go! megabyte how interesting that I am not even at my full power slashes the guardian neck open they issue an shut down command to the core before fading off line .
bob has run out into the core hearing an loud banging of metal sound on the surrounding doors . I will be back for you new guardian Jumps into the vent system bob issues an code red suri soldiers rush in oh no they notice the sound of something moving in the vents ah there you are is clawed at by an massive group of suris you won't hurt him back virus , they let out an growl jumps through smashing the window to the outside lands with an forceful impact that shakes the building retreat my virus army one day I'll control mainframe moves back to the Torr causing panic in streets doing so until there back there .
Bob moves to there fallen teacher the web tool detaches once it senses there no more life in them sighs why did i have be an cadet not an true guardian huh its attached to my front leg it wants me to be the current guardian here well looks like i going to have an lot to learn before I can be an true one to mend and defend mainframe. after all this happens this is bobs main normal theme
Love all the support friend hint I made another one just now for monstrox that ties in for jestro and ruinea as well for there past.Also extra note bad ending is being written to be longer and more intense
All the happened before this story started summed up in this tribute and the fight between matrix/enzo vs megabyte is also how the cs version gets the scar matrix was able to revert back to being enzo after a set amount of time extra hexdemical /megabyte clip yelling at eachother this is what happens when the two are not getting along and voice clips of megabyte
Megabyte in portal due to him trying to hack into the game meets up with glados and is stuck there until the player helps or refuses to help them leading down neutral path or bad path im doing neutral path dialogue first beginning with this so you escaped have you ,over on this cell glados has me trapped in just hack into its control panel it will release the door lock,after freeing him why thank you player ,I'll have a deal with you then to help you to defeat glados,how far away are those turrets again .hurry up player this puzzle is time based and well i could escape could you do the same with your portal gun in the same time it takes,hears turrets stay back or they'll notice us here . music theme here freeing megabyte
Middle neutral path dialogue of megabyte in portal player how are you devising we solve this puzzle,what is the purpose of this maze,slashes a turret apart annoyance you won't stop us from getting free of this place,fire trap you thought we would fall for it sorry to say your wrong glados
end battle dialogue final battle dialogue you won't stop me again from my freedom and the players,I have been working on a way to deal with you slash at the wires holding glados up,hurry and destroy some of cores player while i handle them, rare dialogue with megabyte and the player can be unlocked or heard as much as I disliked them at first they proven me wrong,should I stay to ensure glados is fully defeated ,do these so call players did have the strength to succeed when others have failed,despite him being a virus he was a great help in defeating glados .
blackmailchan: wai wai i see youuuu
Sept 21, 2015 18:06:33 GMT
blackmailchan: reav if you get on and see this- no the pelt has not been made yet- you can go ahead and make one!
Sept 21, 2015 18:07:41 GMT
blackmailchan: and also if u want to animate something i still have the scorpion who needs a little bit of redoing but is rigged to be animated and already has a few animations on it too
Sept 21, 2015 18:10:29 GMT
blackmailchan: hes linked in the to do list for u
Sept 21, 2015 18:10:51 GMT
Nøwαι: Blackie, I see you tooo! :'D
Sept 21, 2015 18:59:41 GMT
Nøwαι: This is black magic.
Sept 21, 2015 18:59:47 GMT
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blackmailchan: i love skype : - )
Sept 21, 2015 20:44:59 GMT
blackmailchan: im gonna keep this up in case skype fucks up a third and final time
Sept 21, 2015 20:46:09 GMT
blackmailchan: oo theres some people online in the game today too : 0 ! woa
Sept 21, 2015 20:50:22 GMT
Deleted: yells at own ass
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